Monday, May 11, 2009

Prologue089


Angevon's Comments:
Busted!
If you think about it, they've only known each other for 5 or so days.
Moving ahead just a little fast...
Well, this is under special circumstances. Meaning: this scene wouldn't have happened at all had Ellsy not had a run-in with death.
But do you really think Kethios will tell Lloyd that his sister nearly died as an excuse for the sappiness?

Retrospective Changeover Comments:
Old Version.

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