Sunday, May 10, 2009

Prologue070


Angevon's Comments:
What is Lloyd planning? You'd think he'd want to bash Kethios for getting too close to his sister.
Then again, Lloyd did entrust her care to Keth.

Retrospective Changeover Comments:
Although Lloyd and Keth did talk about it a little bit, I'm sure the situation sounded much, much worse coming from Pheldrin.
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