Saturday, May 9, 2009

Prologue059


Angevon's Comments:
Pheldrin is a bit more serious when the conversation is one-on-one. He has a point though; if Lloyd thought there was something between his friend, Keth, and his sister, Ellsy, he probably wouldn't be happy...
And, of course, Kethios blindly denies anything of the sort.

Retrospective Changeover Comments:
In retrospect, Keth really should've made sure Ellsy understood that, not convince Pheldrin.
Old Version.

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